English Language Writing Skills
By Danso Kwasi Nti Samuel (DAS). Study the complete course source, examine every model and practise alongside Professor Jarvis.
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common thread among these causes is the presence of dry, combustible material, which is
often exacerbated by prolonged periods of drought and high temperatures. Understanding
these causes highlights the importance of fire safety measures and responsible behavior in
preventing bush fires.
Identification of coherency in the paragraph
The coherency in the paragraph on the causes of bush fires is achieved through the logical
flow of ideas and the use of transition words that connect different causes smoothly. Here’s
how it maintains coherency:
1. Logical Flow: The paragraph starts by introducing the main idea: the causes of bush
fires. It then categorizes these causes into natural and human factors, which are logically
connected.
2. Transition Words and Phrases:
• "One major natural cause is lightning strikes..." transitions to the first cause.
• "Human activities, however, contribute significantly..." smoothly introduces human
factors.
• "For instance, unattended campfires or discarded cigarette butts..." provides specific
examples.
• "Agricultural practices, such as slash-and-burn farming, also play a role..." introduces
another human factor.
• "Additionally, equipment malfunctions, like sparks from machinery or power lines, can
lead to unintended fires..." adds further examples.
• "The common thread among these causes is the presence of dry, combustible material..."
connects the various causes under a common factor.
• "Understanding these causes highlights the importance of fire safety measures and
responsible behavior in preventing bush fires."
